Three Senryu
the clam dig;
three cracked shells,
ten broken nails
heated discussion-
two young men pause
for girl watching
teenage couple-
the crisscross flutter
of hormones
3 Lights Gallery, March 2009
Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
3 comments:
I love the humour in the second senyru. Although the two men are arguing, the girl walking past in some way unites them, if only albeit for a short while.
Adelaide - I'm such a great admirer of your work! So glad you have decided to discover that you keep a blog.
Thanks for the kind words you left at my blog - always a pleasure to hear from you.
Just discovered your blog, love your work. This set of three is charming - humorous and sharply observed.
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