tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post6979283357750787979..comments2024-03-28T09:05:09.977-04:00Comments on White Petals: September HaikuAdelaidehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13659330720476971418noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-82538877414050994652010-09-29T23:10:33.584-04:002010-09-29T23:10:33.584-04:00Hi Justin, I suggest you check out http://www.ahap...Hi Justin, I suggest you check out http://www.ahapoetry.com/ for information on writing haiku as well as other informative web sites. Haiku, by the way, is the same in the singular and plural. Hurricanes occur in late summer and early fall. I have used it as a kigo. Haiku does not use personification as you have done in your haiku in Line 3. I received your e-mail. Are you Roy? or Justin?<br /><br /> AdelaideAdelaidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01807278813737986532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-26060175078699667392010-09-29T22:45:44.953-04:002010-09-29T22:45:44.953-04:00Thank you Kristin. I was away which is why I didn...Thank you Kristin. I was away which is why I didn't respond sooner.<br /><br />AdelaideAdelaidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01807278813737986532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-74738477552945480192010-09-18T03:07:31.391-04:002010-09-18T03:07:31.391-04:00Excellent loved all three especially the Russian ...Excellent loved all three especially the Russian Sage and Hurrican Forecast.<br /><br />A question please?<br /><br />was hurrican forecast your kiga?<br /><br />really new at this...making alot of mistakes with my haiku trys.<br /><br />would Sirius ..be a kiga? as in Dog Star and in Dog Days as in Indian Summer.<br /><br />btw do you have any Indian Summer Haikus??<br /><br />here is mine I am sure it is messed up.<br /><br />Indian Summer comes<br />rigid leaf sails across pond<br />Trees blush embarrassedAslanspalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07110111004592903874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-89389116993566851022010-09-18T02:06:11.096-04:002010-09-18T02:06:11.096-04:00I love all of these!!! I especially love the chrys...I love all of these!!! I especially love the chrysanthemum one. Beautiful imagery.Kristin Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16779222705654595462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-32306631330413967972010-09-08T10:22:38.142-04:002010-09-08T10:22:38.142-04:00I hope you are well now. Thanks for visiting.
Ad...I hope you are well now. Thanks for visiting.<br /><br />AdelaideAdelaidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01807278813737986532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-186692869127192899.post-75410491034319116252010-09-08T10:08:26.515-04:002010-09-08T10:08:26.515-04:00Oh, I'm hip to that Russian sage-
watched the ...Oh, I'm hip to that Russian sage-<br />watched the insects outside the hospital in the gardens during a recent stay.bandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04291863523347898783noreply@blogger.com